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One Hour Sonic - 16

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Sixteenth installment of :icononehoursonic:. For Sonic's twenty-first. The fun's just getting started.

Comments and critiques are always appreciated. (Still psyched over this whole critique-requesting thing! :D)
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

okay critique time~!

i think the vision is good, i like where the light source is coming from.
and i like how sonic is looking at the viewer like they're 'there.'
but, i think it's a little hard to tell where he's at - is it a bar? a restaurant? x'D i would suggest maybe making it a bit more clear.

for originality, it may not be the most unique thing [lots of sonic art, especially for his birthday xD] but, i think showing him drinking was cool since it's his 21st XD

for technique, i like your colouring style and how you used a different lineart colour.
but, i think some of the anatomy and placement could use some work - his arm looks like a 'stump', i would suggest making the rest of his arm visible. xD
his left arm is a little too long on the first 'section', and his index finger is a little large.
at the angle of his face, his spikes on the left wouldn't be as visible as they are here.
his torso is a little long, and his legs a little thin.
i'm not so good at 'modern sonic' anatomy either, so it's all right x'D ;;

and for impact, i like the vibrant colours, and his warm face/relaxed pose.
but i think if he were more centered/saw more of him, and if some of the 'blank space' was cropped off, it would be a little bit better.

i hope i could help! have a nice day!